Cascading showers of love overflow
Coming so close, dangerously close to you.
Feeling my way into your heart
No more delays; I've come to stay.
Wrapped inside out
Heavenly maze
Freely compelled
My love to share
Cascading showers of love overflow
coming so close, dangerously close to you.
I'm feeling my way into your heart
No more delays; I've come to stay
When you call me on the phone
Feeling so connected...
How can I roam?
This is our story
Only ours to tell
You've got my heart
You wear it so well.
Cascading showers of love overflow
coming so close, dangerously close to you.
A contest entry
- Write me a song by insearchofsweetness.
1750 points, ended April 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i really like the line "dangerously close to you" very well.... ♫
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I appreciate the inclusion of "rain". So glad you entered my contest. . .it will be a tough one to judge.
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i was just about to say then a good use with the repetition then i saw it was for a song contest so yeah that is why
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trying my hand..
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"Cascading showers of love overflow
coming so close, dangerously close to you."
this is very angelic and just... beautiful. i loved your rythm and flow. very well done
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Thanks...does it sound like a song? that's the poetical question.hahhaaha
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haha...yes it does actually. i could see it as a very incredible song infact.
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