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Intensity Tightens

All the worlds in a pot.
Inside ingredients boiling hot.
More heat reveals the plot.

A contest entry

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  • Carly Pop gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    WOW!! What a great poem!! More heat reveals the plot....wish I thought of that line!! thanks for entering!


    • 2lullabyhaven
      April 17, 2008
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      Hahhaha thanks for this delightful review. Also, thanks for the honor of the Silverlol


  • crimsondew
    April 16, 2008
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    lol...that's a different prompt...Wonderful take..love...All the best!


  • individuality gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    and i think the lid needs taking off for awhile, to let the steam roam free so it can cool down a little before tasting

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