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Pre-Write Without Title

Once upon a time
I was young and free
Once upon a time
I feared neither bird nor bee

Happy ever after
Wasn't just a dream
Happy ever after
Was plausible, it seemed

Then an Evil Wizard
Sold me to a knight
And the Evil Wizard
Threatened me each night.

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So, I was sitting down doing my daily writing attempt, and this bit was what appeared on the page. Should I attempt to continue it?

Is this worth it?

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  • ecrivain01
    July 25, 2008
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    Yes. ;)

    You need another stanza at least, and maybe several.