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This Feeling

 

In Love
 

 

The essence of expressing
what it is, you do to me
How you make me feel
when I am around you now

More than a smile
or a pat on the back
More than a hug or hands entwined
walking in the park
If love's an institution
Call me crazy baby
Lock away the key

If love ever has a theme song
This quite possibly could be it
I've arranged such a perfect melody

 

A contest entry

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  • SmartBrick
    May 24, 2008
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    I LOVE UR PICTURE SOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!thnx 4 entering!Good luck!~

    signed confused


  • raggyann
    April 17, 2008
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    awsome you realy write songs well
    i hear your music behind your words


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 17, 2008
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    This is good..


  • Blooming Poet
    April 15, 2008

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    would you like your gold now or later. JK. This poem is what I am looking for 100%. Thanks for entering, such a perfect poem.