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One Stepping


I spend my time
dancing with shadows,
shivering in the
cold of it's
embrace.
I slip on storm
worn stones as
I drift between
the dark and light
of loneliness.

Searching the hours
of time,
never stopping
for rest.
I know
there is
no warmth in
waltzing with
shadows,
for a man
with only half a
heart.

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  • Simply Simple
    June 6, 2008
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    Love.

    Not bad though. It's a hard word. Excellent attempt.
    Thanks for entering.


  • -BlackKnight- gold member
    June 5, 2008
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    Thanks to process of elimination, this is clearly based on "love".

    I've read much better.


  • Cannonsfire
    April 16, 2008

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    I cannot see you as a man with half a heart unless it is because you give so much of yourself to others. Love, C