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My Life is a Party

My life is great from head to toe
My life is cool including school
Life will come and life will go
But life will always rule
It can be magnificently capricious
But either way, life is delicious!

My life is one way or another sometimes
And will always, always change
Sometimes I'm relatively normal
And sometimes, I just feel strange
I am who I am, who I am is me,
I'm simply psychotic, but only slightly!

My life won't be with me forever,
But it certainly has it's tastes
Life is the best thing that ever happened to me,
And TOTALLY isn't a waste.
I live on, give on, and show some respect
Because I know life won't let me, "Hold on a sec,"

But we do all pass at one point
It's what we have to do
We'll all see each other once again
And this, I know is true
Right now I'm still alive, and I know the day is young,
So why not LIVEN up this place? Let's get our party on!

Author notes

I have done a poem just like this before, called "My Wonderful Life," But I needed to redo it for a grade, so I mixed it up a bit. Let me know how you liked it!

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  • kim5519
    April 17, 2008

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    Nice

    Life is wonderipifical ain't it. Well most of the time but the good matches the bad. Tears compensated with laughter.