Bashing down with words violence and anger
Tell me baby was it really you or the drugs?
I thought we were doing good[it was a lie]
The past flashing before our eyes
Tell me how am I not to cry!
You said you were done I knew it was not true
Yet I did not seem to stop you!
How long this time they wont say!
But I hope things will be ok!
What happened to that talk we had the other day
Was it nothing did you even care?
What about me, your daughter, what about the ones you love
You were right when you said it will never work out
But baby I want it and so I am here I will not go
Some call me foolish some don’t understand
But when you are with me you’re the sweetest man
[well that is when your sober && clean]
I am so lost right now I want to s-c-r-e-a-m!!!
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i like it which is rare because i usually dont like rhyming poems all that much.
it feels a bit unfinished to me..like there should be a second part to it
so you can continue the story.
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this is really powerful. ive been in a similar situation before and drugs suck, they ruin the person taking them and the people that love them. good job on this
christina
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Wonderful. I know how it feels to go out with a guy he drinks and does drugs. This is very sad, but it is very well written. I love it! Good job!
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omg...this poem is great i love it so much.great job!
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speachless!
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This is an excellent write Ash. Now that I know a little about you, I totally understand the poem. I am so sorry you are going through this traumatic time. I hope all gets put back in order and that you and your boyfriend have peace and a long life full of love not confusion.
Love and hugs
- joanne
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oh geez so many conflicting emotions.. has this happened to you? you write it like youve got experience with it. good write
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