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Hangover

Had to drink so much, didn't you?
Always partying it up
Now you can't get out of bed or move
Gazing at that water filled cup
Out and about you just had to be
Volumes of liquor consumed all night
Evolving into more than Loopy
Really, is it worth this nauseous fight?

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I really need some WATER!
Written December 12th, 2003

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  • Desire gold member
    December 26, 2003
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    I am so into acrostics...I love them and you got me hooked baby~Keep on writing and inspiring~My computer has been acting funky so I don't get to comment as frequently as I would like~But I am playing serious catch up ...Big hugs and much love~Desire


  • In-fin-ite
    December 15, 2003
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    I love the single line high light of writing. As for the last line "Really, is it worth this nauseous fight?" I would have to say that I think it's always worth it when done right... hehe

    ~JayLynn


  • glazecovered
    December 12, 2003
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    This is great. Really true too, because that is exactly what hangover feels like. You wrote about little details as well as the general feeling, like "Gazing at that water filled cup." Does everybody do it, or is it just us?


  • SlippingHalo
    December 12, 2003
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    lol..... This is so true... A very funny write you have here..... uhh.. not that I've ever experienced this! that would be illegal..... ahem
    cute write
    Missy


  • Samplette gold member
    December 12, 2003
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    []here is a glass....I so remember those days...I am so glad they are behind me...lol
    ooopssssss shhhhhhhhhhh hehehe
    sam

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