Storm swept skies
carry sweet nothings
to the ears of deaf trees
while life is left dangling...
Dogged dreams drag dead minds
into the depths of oblivion -
painted with quills and ink spills,
they torment only those with unopened eyes...
For every step one takes,
the earth is shook and something breaks.
In the darkness silence quivers,
hidden from the sunrise.
Everlasting evil esscence
peppers each blind eye
with fate
arousing interests that before lay only dormant.
Tripping over poison lips
talking to tentative fingertips -
darkness ever clutching onto the folds of silken hearts
the world begins to crumble and decay...
Author notes
I... don't, know.
But I liked it it was fun thanks for this kick-face contest best of luck ^.^
A contest entry
- Something Wicked This Way Comes.... by PerfectImperfection.
900 points, ended May 4, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Positive and Critique feedback most appreciated...
Comments
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This is certainly a powerful piece. A poetic infusion of angst and some intriguing depth of imagery. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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Bitter Sweetness
Tripping over poison lips
talking to tentative fingertips -
That is my favourite part! You have a really kewl rhyme to most your poetry. Good luck! -
You are amazing with the flow and the vivid image you paint in your dark poetry. Well done!
Love,
Amera
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"Tripping over poison lips
talking to tentative fingertips -
darkness ever clutching onto the folds of silken hearts
the world begins to crumble and decay..."
Love it...what else can i say....really.
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