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My love grew

In full bloom
you came to be
Your essence looms
to set free

My inner thirst
your nectar drips
I am immersed
with taste on lips

From dead of night
a flower grew
To greet the light
in mornings dew

A hidden beauty
I now behold
Your gift to me
I now unfold

Your petals soft
on wind they flew
To take aloft
my love for you






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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 18, 2008

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    Ah..this is indeed a heart warming piece..and I love the immagery and thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece....


  • Short but cute
    April 16, 2008
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    This is beautiful!