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than the flowers and butterflies------------------

Its wings are soft and clean
and almost look like rose petals

its colours vary from stage to stage
and its lips are seas of sweetness

It doesn't live long but treasures in every loving heart
butter fly you are great!
the flower may last long for a week
and get withered away in passage of time.

Like wise butterfly's life is too short
not extending for more than a month and half
it slowly gets extinguished on sands of time
we humans who breath between life and death
are we really gracious than the flowers and butterflies

With so many passions and fashioning en robing us
we look more selfish than any other creature
once we get rid of all our external additions
we are as pure as flowers with no sin encompassing

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 18, 2008

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    Ah so universal approach you are touching here ..this is indeed a piece to impress ...I love this piece..thanks for sharing it...