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Jacob

Chase Away The Nightmares Of My Past
Let The Glow And Warmth Of Your Smile
Shield Me From The Darkness Of My Memories

Shadow-Kissed, You Saved Me
So I May Live Again
Jacob, Oh Jacob, Keep Me Sane

Damaged As I Am
You Still Continue To Try
To Love What Was Left Behind

Edward, Why Would You Go?
'it'll be as if i never existed'
Why Did You Lie To Me?

Your Existance Is Tattoed To My Soul
No Amount Of Distance Or Time
Can Change What My Heart Wont Let Go

Without Him, Im Lost, Never To Love Again
But While My Heart Still Beats
Jacob, Will You Be My Sun?

Author notes

Option #2 Bella's POV in the middle of NEW MOON
Option #6 Team Jacob...but personally IM Team Edward all the way
--Emotina

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  • Luthien Luinwe
    September 22, 2008

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    Ahhh.... I love it! So beautifully portrayed. I love Edward but I feel bad for Jacob too. Jacob and Bella really did love each other just not the same way. Poor guy. Oh well, anyways great write!


  • Silent Emotions
    July 27, 2008

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    im team switzerland cuz i cant really choose between edward and jacob, but this made me love jacob even more. wonderful write


  • Missa
    July 25, 2008

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    ome i loved this! but GO TEAM EDWARD!!! YAY! uhm...but you forgot your username. you MUST have it i the authors notes by july 28 at the latest or you will be deleted.


    • emotina
      July 25, 2008
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      haha np all done
      hope yu liked my poem
      **fingers crossed!**

  • depressedangelchick
    May 16, 2008

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    oh my goodness that is soooooo bella and so beautiful, even if i'm not the winner of this contest i hope you are because im sorta obsessed right now on them lol omg i ahve tears in my eyes!


  • lostangel07
    May 14, 2008
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    Perfect. I love it. It so so describes how wonderful the whole thing is.
    Great job.


  • Sedated Affection
    April 19, 2008

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    Well done...as a Twilight Saga addict (lol) I LOVED this... it feeds my need for more Bella, Edward , and Jacob until 'Breaking Dawn' comes out! Good Job!


    • emotina
      April 21, 2008
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      lol merci darlingg

      i cant wait for the 4th book either

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