At this witching hour, blackest night
Do I call upon thee, lover
to become, at last, in true sight
what passion's will can uncover.
The storm of my fierce love, I raise.
Into power, I make my call.
Do not fail me in magick's way
It is with patience, that I recall
Come to my side, in sweet haste.
For this moment, I have waited,
with my blood given, take your taste
from this charm I have created.
So, that this man, will know his mate
let not my loves’ power abate.
Author notes
Option #1 though it has elements of the others
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired....... by azlyn.
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Comments
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Wow. I like it. And I like that the end is only two lines, for some reason that really worked. Overall, very well done, and good luck.
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WOW! This reminded me of my Dark Love story I am reading. They are connected first by thought, she is a mortal, him immortal. He needs her to go to him freely, so that he will know.
Love this bit
Come to my side, in sweet haste.
For this moment, I have waited,
with my blood given, take your taste
from this charm I have created.
So, that this man, will know his mate
let not my loves’ power abate.
MORE, MORE, MORE!
Good luck
Luv sweetness
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A wonderful take on the picture, beautifully penned. Good luck in the contest with it
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Can't wait to read your thoughts...thank you for your thoughts!
Az
P.S. Nice to meet you!!! -
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Hello
Thank you, for the opportunity to have some real fun. The picture was the most interesting I have seen. I hope to see more of your challenges -
What arcane magic, I peruse
A great picture prompt. The most unique I've seen here.
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