When I first saw your face
I went and tripped on my shoe-lace
An amazing fall in all my grace
when I first saw your face
As I looked in to each eye
I thought maybe I would die
Of the swelling in my heart
My face became red as a cherry
Pop-tart!
Then I felt your tender lips
Brush against my own
I knew, I should have known
I want you for my own
Simple as that you
snatched my heart
and tenderly made my
grievances part
And for that Ive thanked you
from the start
Now it is time to go
Though this really has been fun
I'm sorry to leave you like this hun
Then you left walked out the door
I touch the cheek where you kissed goodbye
and sigh
Just another day gone by
When life gets the better of my lie
Author notes
eh just something I drew up in my me-ness
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- Love and Hurt by xofightinirishx3.
495 points, ended May 20, 2008, 26 entries
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Comments
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It's kinda funny...no offense..I didn't mean that in a smart aleck way...but yeah nice job...very rhyming maybe a little too much though.
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