My little brother was,
Giggly, fun, bubbly, rude,
Silly, funny, annoyingly sweet,
Dimples, smiles, addicted to food,
I loved my little brother,
And yes, I still do,
But he’s not my little brother any more,
He’s someone new,
He still has his dimples,
I’m sure of that,
I’ve don’t see them anymore though,
You’ve seen to that,
He cries all the time,
But not of laughter anymore,
He cries all the time,
Because he is so sore,
You scare him, you hurt him,
You make him cry,
You want to defeat him,
But you can only try,
Because my little brother,
Has got me,
And I’ve got him,
We will succeed,
You’ll tear us to shreds,
I’m sure of that,
But we’ll sew each other back together,
And we’ll get you back,
We’ll get you back,
For all you’ve done,
Years of terror,
Are just no fun,
My little Brother,
Is eleven years old,
He’s behind at school,
As he’s always told,
My little brother,
Is struggling lots,
But I love him so much,
With Jelly Tots,
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I like this one very much! It shows real emotion towards your brother and hate towards who is hurting you guys! Good job!
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You’ll tear us to shreds,
I’m sure of that,
But we’ll sew each other back together,
And we’ll get you back,
sew eachother back together
I love this poem, and I hope everything is ok with you and your brother... stay brave!?!
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ohh this is very touching and at the end was like a weird revenge rhyme. kinda freaky but really cool!
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this is cute. Very good description of the love you have for your brother.
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very sad
I'm so glad you to have each other. this poem shows that times can get tough but if we have someone we can deal with the problem. wonderful write i liked it a lot. -
this like brought tears to my eyes; haha. its so sweet yet sad. its so good that you guys have eachother though. i really like the part--
You’ll tear us to shreds,
I’m sure of that,
But we’ll sew each other back together.
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This poem really touched me.. I really enjoyed reading it... I know how it feel to have a brother or sister that u care about alot-- i have 6 sisters.and 6 brother...that i would do anything for... And im the oldest/... But like i said keep the good work up!
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Well, this is splendid. I only wish my daughter was more concerned with her brother, but right now he is just a pain to her. She's 10, he's 5. Nice poem.
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lol thanks
im his sister. but thanks anyways!
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this is so sweet and cute!
i am sure you are a great big bro!
just remember dear your little brother will always be looking up at you in this life. so be a star and show him as he gets older how great the world can be.
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