Such innocence and virtue
embedded within her body
that lay on the cold, steel table before me.
I’m sure that when she woke up this morning
she didn’t know I’d be ther to wish her a last good night.
“Mm… w-where am I?”
Shh… my sweet – everything’s alright;
you won’t be here for much longer.
I plan on showing you a whole new type
of pleasure tonight.
She screamed – her fear!
It sends shivers down my spine
as I tape up her mouth and muffle her screams.
I long for the sound of fear but oh-
the games have just begun.
Her screams turned to whimpers and she looked down to see
I’d taken off every bit of her clothing
and I’d tied her down to the table
her legs spread wide and her hands held high above her head
my favorite fucking position to date.
Squirming, she tried to find a way to cover herself
I laughed, how foolish this young maiden was
Dearest… I whispered, right down in her ear
You’ll never escape my eyes…
and you have everything to fear.
Once again she tried to scream
but this time she lurched up her body away from the table.
I grasped the edge of it and let out a lustful sigh
now, yes now… was the time.
I will take away that innocence.
I picked up the scalpel that I’d set down to her right
and lightly I began to trace it up her thigh.
With my other hand I gently stroked a finger across her face
as she looked up at me with those big, terrified eyes
I felt myself growing harder with each passing moment.
When she felt the cold of the scalpel against her clit
her eyes got wider than I’d ever seen,
such a deer in the headlights –
one about to get hit.
Child… you look scared… I cooed.
I moved the scalpel up to her waist
but the bitch began to cry and tears filled her eyes.
No – that will never do! I shouted, angrily
and I pushed the scalpel down into her skin,
feeling her warm blood ooze out onto my fingers.
Her cries became louder then
as I brought up my fingers and licked away the mess
and little slut had bled all over me.
More and more, she struggled against her bondages
until I could finally take no more.
I jumped up onto the table
and I straddled her waist as she screamed again,
she must not have noticed my nudity before.
Her cries became so frantic and fearful…
it seems now she finally understands.
I reared back and I plunged into her
forcing my thick manhood through,
feeling her virginity break – that sweet little maidenhead.
Her screams fueled my lust
as I plowed her endlessly.
Feeling myself reach the peek of my climax,
I bent down over the sweaty, tearful, still-screaming girl
My dear… did you have as much as I? I whispered
as once again I took the scalpel and dug it in deep,
so very deep that her screams became weaker.
I exploded within her and I let out a moan
as her screams turned to whimpers
and her body turned cold.
She was still alive though, this I could see
so I shoved in the scalpel again and again.
Her blood was now not as warm
and it spilled with such effrontery onto the floor.
I brought up the scalpel and licked away the mess,
surveying the skeptical and debating
the accomplishment I’d made.
I had taken her innocence and virtue away;
she would never live to take another breath in this world
and that made me proud
for that was my intention.
I’d taken away everything from this pure being.
With a last thought I ripped off the tape from her mouth
and bending over her once more
I kissed those cold lifeless lips of that dead bitch
and I said with finalty.
Good night, sweet child.
Author notes
This is the first erotic-ish poem I've ever written... umm, not sure if it fits what you were looking for or if it works... please give me some feedback.
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THIS IS AMAZING!
if i ever die, i hope it's in this similar manner
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wow britty. this gave me the goose bumps. its really creep to know that this stuff happens to people all the time and sometime the person isnt stopped. it shows how our society can be very disturbing at times. good write and keep up the good work
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Very nice work on this one. I really enjoyed it.
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Thanks!
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS WAS SUCH AN AMAZING PIECE!
It's grippingly chilling and EXTREMELY suspenseful as well as erotic.
I find this hot as fuck......
and in response to the person who commented this,
it's really fucked up but i've actually gone through.....i mean,
my mom's b/f used to do things to me and everytime he'd get like that,
i used to revert to the horror movies my father used to force me to watch when i was younger and somehow, seeing myself as a victim of murder used to help me cope with my mom's boyfriend.
I know it sounds really strange and fucked up,
but i was so young at the time that i really didn't see anything wrong with the way i was thinking though to most it's gruesome and disturbing (obviously i know it's disturbing now).
But anyway,
you are a very, VERY, VERY TALENTED writer mah friend,
i am thoroughly impressed with your entry.
Thanks so much, kudos
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Thank you very much! I wasn't sure if it was what you were looking for or anything, but I'm glad you liked it... and sorry about your past, I think we all have those things in our past that we'd like to block out and try to forget but in the end they become a part of us.
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Yeah,
it was definitely what i was looking for. Actually, EXACTLY so. haha,
you're quite talented!! W00T!
*dances*
and yeah, it sucks but if you really want to speak the truth, there isn't one of us who has had an easy past i'd bet. Most people have had a rough life one way or another. But anywayz,
keep writing
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Thats sent serious chills down my spine. Its really disturbing... As is with your usual writing its well written but I really have complimenting a poem that depicts the worst crimes in our society. I've spent years trying to help girls and women who have had to deal with abuse, sexual assault and other despicable crimes and I know the toll. I hope you do well in the contest though because I'd hate to think such an evil poem was written for nothing.
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You know damned well I don't support any of this you goon
I just saw it as an oppurtunity to venture out into more challenging prompts and test my abilities...
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