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Asphalt Princess

Hours undignified,
behind hydroponic memories,
Smokey scepters become her crest

street heiress 
wearing concrete crowns

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  • Meme Wheeler
    April 16, 2008

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    Oh, royalty does exist in some of the most unexpected places. You made me think of a girl in the ghetto growing up not knowing who she really is. This is simply beautiful!


  • Tattboyspet
    April 16, 2008

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    the line "Smokey scepters becomes her crest" needs attention, other than that it was really good, but I cannot do anything with it until it has been fixed - please send me the link once you've done it