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~ Star Child ~

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Yes indeed she was a poet who shined-
Wrote poetry which was just damned divine-
Charming and pretty as the Milky Way-
Eyes of emerald and hips that swayed-

With a love of nature and simple things-
Often believed that she was born with wings-
She loved the insects and birds of the marsh-
Never uttering a word which was harsh-

Laney was truly a lovely lady-
Even lying under trees so shady-
Do hope we shall meet in a future time-
So again~ we can share rhythm & rhyme ~

 




 

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  • Cannonsfire
    April 15, 2008
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    I know so many thought well of her, I do hope she knows how much she is missed. Love, C


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    April 15, 2008
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    awe...a beautiful and tender write...
    many blessings
    ~A~


  • Melodies
    April 15, 2008

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    Beautiful and describes Laney. Where oh where did she go?


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 15, 2008
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    I am really very sad to hear that Dalanay left the ap...