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The Struggle

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As lamplight of hell beckons with searing eyes
angel of forgiveness pulls back from temporal plane.
Encompassing this soul in destiny's hands,
the Light and Dark battle for dominion.
Warfare's colours close in to destroy,
when final moments see spiritual clarity of truth.
Succumbing unto the circle of Light, in peace,
Darkness will never penetrate the citadel of paradise.



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Artist: Mingrune

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  • artis
    April 16, 2008
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    good work,,,congrats on the H.M.


  • penman gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • pangur ban
    April 16, 2008

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    The poem flows well. The words and content fit the photograph appropriately.
    Hope you do well with the contest.

    Thank you,
    PB