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Think About Us

Dear Miss Emily,
there are times I dream.
I have seen you in the,
halls.
I have seen you in some,
classes.
Years have passed,
and I have fallen.
I feel that I have fallen,
from Heaven itself.
For the past week,
I wanted to be more.
I couldn't figure out,
how to tell you promisingly.
Tonight I sit here and write,
thinking about you.
You know who I am,
but can you figure it out.
No one will,
tell you.
For I am,
your secret admirer.

Think about,

dating someone new.

Am I a boy,

or am I a girl.

You decide,

what you want.

If you want to know more,

write me a note.

How will I get it,

you ask?

Write your sister,

Amanda.

She will not,

tell you who I am.

But yet she will,

pass the notes between us.

I will eventually,

reveal myself.

But for now,

think of me.

 

---Your Secret Admirer

Author notes

i wrote it for her, maybe its good, maybe its not
two i've loved her... ever wondering how things would turn out... will i get my chance she promised me two years ago

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  • KristyBrainsikk
    June 16, 2008

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    How will I get it,

    you ask?

    Write your sister,

    Amanda.

    That is my favorite part! I loved every bit of it! I really believe that you should try to get published. I would love to read a book with your work in it