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i lie alone... now
fighting the chill
pushing against the emptiness
that has become night
filled in with feathers
these sheets twisting around
where your arms belong
and i listen to your sighs
remembering anxious breaths
caressing skin

afraid the scent will fade
and leave me holding on
trying to grasp memories
as if i could wrap myself around
empty spaces
hands holding on to each other
cannot span the distance
i'm tracing lines... counting miles
every second adds up... alone
incomplete

i'm breathing for tomorrows
choking on the reality of today
losing pace, out of rhythm
i'm still tripping on stones
of yesterdays mountains
show me the path you've found
where love leads us along


cuore a cuore a cuore

 

 

 

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  • sandybeaches gold member
    July 15
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    Absolutely beautiful! I love your way with words! ***Pam***


  • greyhaime
    July 11
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    coure a coure a coure


  • Beth17
    July 3
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    wow
  • icebear
    June 21

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    beautiful

    So tranquil and troubled at the same time. Maybe , the love we had is the love we got. That's it. No point in yearning for it is there? Yet we still do. Strange. Such a dreamlike quality to your poem...

  • you wrote this piece of art very nicley! the emotions are great! keep it goin,
    daisy
  • tcornelius
    June 17
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    Great poem really nice.
  • Nice read

    This is a lovely poem about the love , troubles and passions of life. the sweetness of love and bitterness of love. "Show me the path you've found where love leads us along.


    • LionessK Greeters member
      June 11
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      thank you

      haven't seen you around in a while, hope you are well.
  • breath of love

    breath of love hanging in the air, wonderful inspiration, melancholy, dreams of what was..

  • Wonderful

    Very beautifully written Kristy!!!!
  • aikisu
    May 21
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    beautiful Kristy

    wow, you got me.

  • aikisu
    May 21
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    Thank you for your kind words. This response helps,Ke
  • So beautiful, the longing is painful to read. Wonderful write.


    whisper
  • Puppydog gold member
    May 17

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    LOST AND ALONE

    All of us feel this way at times! It does take a caring and special person to reach out to us and pull us back.


  • Sterac
    May 12

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    Powerful

    I really like this...the whole piece is great but the last stanze to me packed a real punch..."I'm breathing for tomorrows, choking on the reality of today" awesome line...you are talented, I look foward to reading more of your work...~Josh

  • sin
    May 1
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    Awesome!!

    Love your poetry!!!


  • greyhaime
    April 28

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    wonderful

    I love this....as you know,, I love the thoughts of the memories and the hope to make more,and little bit of the fear of not being able to have those caresses and sighs soon enough.well done,well done!!!


  • Xx Alice xX
    April 17

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    In pain, we must remember that without the pleasure we wouldn't have the memory that creates the pain. Have faith that you will find the pleasure again.

    GREAT WRITE!!!

  • Kristy girl,
    I've been in this lonely place so many times and my own heart has spoken these very same words so many times...
    Keep your chin up, sweetie; the loneliness WILL end and in its' place will come the sweetest of feelings
    AWESOME to read a piece written by your very talented hand


  • Akimbo silver member
    April 16

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    hug

    I adore the title because it rests a measure of hope against your secluded thoughts. Companionship is all any one really wants, to think otherwise only makes us bitter as sooner or later that brave face hardens like stone trying to lock emotions away.
    It's amazing, well, sad, how many people are lonely while in midst of a relationship. I applaud you for sharing this. It is as poignant as it is beautiful. I think the pathways are there; it's just trying to make them last, or making them last when perhaps there's nothing left, which is the conundrum.
    Best to you always Kristy,
    Kj


  • Zayra
    April 15
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    be well poet....


  • Hekate gold member
    April 15

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    I know that sometimes being lonely can really really hurt and it seems like it'll never end. This is when friendship comes in and hopefully take some of that pain away.
    Hope you're ok

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