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Perfection

Perfection

Lacking Perfection
Means there is Action
Because no one is perfect
Yelling is strict,
Shouting is mean
But we all do those things
Siting on Awnings
Really Yawning
Being lazy with time
Finally its bedtime
Feeling bad about Halftime
Cause we did nothing to day.

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  • DawnKestrel
    April 16, 2008

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    Very nice!

    No one is perfect, but that is what makes life so fun! If we were all perfect, life would be really boring, because we would not make mistake, and everyone would be the same.
    While we are not perfect, we have something to strive towards. The picture is also inspirational, I may end up writing a poem based on it!

    I really like how the first and last line are both 'Perfection'.


  • nichtmich silver member
    April 16, 2008

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    I think I get your general drift Perfection is a goal, not a state of mind. Am I close? Anyway I like this and the picture is just beautiful!


    • FuturePoet96
      April 16, 2008
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      You are On the dot. I was trying to get through the idea that you cant achieve perfection untill you achieve accepting your mistakes :] thanks for the applaus.

      -sierra


  • TheShadowsOfMe
    April 15, 2008
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    I absolutely Love it! You are right completely...


    • FuturePoet96
      April 16, 2008
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      Thanks!

      Thank you very much! And thank you for the applause!

      -sierra

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