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standing still

Forced to the edge of the cliff,
I see the rapid waves of life below...
crashing against the rocks of time,
a reflection of my demise.

The height of this structure is alarming,
as I see only one way to escape.....
jumping is far to risky,
so all I can do is wait.

Confused in the wrath of this moment,
the sky is engulfed with darkness...
as the moon reflects illusions in the night...
things are not always as they appear to be.

Winds rapidly whisping by me,
whistling in my ears.....
if I listen close enough;
I could almost hear my fears.

Time is as it shouldn't be,
still and quite, moving slowly....
as I await the sunrise,
I look to the sky.

The stars are dancing....
forming a path across the universe
leading me to a place that subsides
as I wallow in their beauty....
I realize I will survive.




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  • whitewinged1
    April 16, 2008

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    Wonderful

    Misty this is an absolutely BEAUTIFUL write! Your expression of thought and feelings in this write are nothing short of wonderful.


    " Winds rapidly whisping by me,
    whistling in my ears.....
    if I listen close enough;
    I could almost hear my fears." I just love this stanza!

    Bravo ! Well Done ! I would give you six clapping little smiley guys but unfortunately 3 is max sorry lol lol


    • lostinthevoid
      April 16, 2008
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      ur to kind

      well thankyou very much for ur wonderful comment on this write....I do appreciate ur time!!