Under white December skies, silver lined with lust tapestry
Dark lonely roads fornicate with frost bitten trees
Thy prevalence through the cold that licks thine cheeks
Is placated only by her name that the wind doth speaks
The stars do mock, they forge her face
They laugh at thee, though shine with grace…
So I venture! Beneath the porcelain moon
The light that guides me and improves the gloom
To her room of wanton, where she awaits
To spread her legs (lust’s pearly gates)
Her hair doth falls freely in strands across her chest
With loving hands of passion I dance upon her breast
Ah…To sip from springs of Eden entwined within her thighs
I see green pools of pleading Goshen shining from her eyes
Slither deep between the moist coves of Heaven
Betwixt velvet sheets, the sins I serve her seven
Thine satyriacal rod doth part her virgin seas
Unleashing a flood that assuaged her pleas
With every sinful thrust that she doth take
Beneath her naked body, a sweet sin lake
For as the candle lights that brightly glare
We cum as one with orgasmic flare…
The air now stained with moans and sighs
As I lap the nectar between her thighs
Her precious knees do quiver and fall
When I give to her Desire’s all….
Now collapsed upon my lovers tits
I softly kiss her supple lips
As she falls deeply into slumber
I reflect upon this night of wonder…
A contest entry
- MAN'S POINT OF VIEW - Make me feel it! by BarefootSoul.
1450 points, ended April 24, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Where's my stinkin' trophy? by Great Cthulhu.
1500 points, ended April 25, 2008, 47 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Ultimate Goal by N e a r.
20000 points, ended June 2, 2008, 946 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything and everything!!!! by Falcon SilverWolf.
450 points, ended June 6, 2008, 74 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
wow....dang...now im all hot and bothered i love a good erotic poem
-
Whoa!
That's some classy hot stuff you've penned here! Wonderful write, this is my favorite line: "The air now stained with moans and sighs" -nice alliteration, and the imagery is just 'dirty'!
Keep your pen to the page and thanks for entering!
-
Wow ok I really loved this poem and Mcphail that's out of order, you can't just slaughter someone's hard work, you were way out of line. I love it and you are a talented writer so keep writing xxx
-
Wow, what a sensuous ride! This poem is steeped in ripe heavy metaphors. I absolutely love the way you think and how you chose such descriptive words like; porcelain moon, lust tapestry, moist cove, goshen eyes many different ones, even the title draws me in. I'm left panting feeling as if I were a part of this, wanting to be. Beautiful writing and I did like the old english added though most don't, I happen to want to do this myself but I force myself not too hehe. Thank you so much for this entry
-
haha. i wouldn't say this is like what i write. but i like the use of a different way of speaking, it gives the poetry a good feel.
good job and good luck. -
yeah, I like the old english style of poetry obviously.
-
a good poem here penned, welcome to the site
not too sure with the doth and thy usage in modern poetry, but it is down to the author i suppose
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
