His mind one could liken
to an old wooden floor,
for, on the rare occasions
he did think,
you could hear
the splintering boards
as he fell through
into oblivion.
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Hey, I know this guy!
What a totally unexpected comparison. Nicely done.
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Oblivion or the basement, right? Ha! Good, Di. - ocerus
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Very creative take on the prompt...witty and well stated...I can hear him thinking now...and it weighing on his mind...
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Witty verse on the topic and and the over taxed person.
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WONDERFUL!!!
Sometimes you can indeed feel what one is thinking as you look at them, by their expression you can almost feel their thoughts.
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