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Heart

Heart.

A simple heart
Will break apart.
Further down the drain
It will show, On your part.
And it will create
A Black heart.

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  • DawnKestrel
    April 16, 2008

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    Nice

    I like your rhym in this poem. I like how the first line is just one word, Heart. I think this is a nice, simple poem, another great pieceon your part.