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A moments Peace

A Moments Peace

A moments peace
At rest finally
and find the sunny side.
I watch the birds fly
and
feel the wind blow,
and i know its about time
for:

A moments Peace

 

 

Some of the Corrections i just made were pointed out by DawnKestrel. And i just wanted to thank you! And have a moments peace everyday!

-sierra

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  • DawnKestrel
    April 16, 2008
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    Lovely poem! Is the word 'reast' supposed to be rest, or am I just having a crazy five minutes?
    My favourite part is line five and seven, "I watch the birdz fly" and "feel the wind blow".
    I think we all need a moments peace each day, and this poem is spot on to what makes me feel peacful. Nice imagery!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    terrific

    Very nice. This is something all people should have. I always tell people to take a few minutes each day to recharge your spirit. It can help you so much. I enjoyed this poem very much. You've spoken clear with sincerity and truth. Thanks for sharing.
    Brian


    • FuturePoet96
      April 15, 2008
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      Thank you!

      Thank you so much. That comment ment a lot to me since i am new you were one of my first Commenters Thanks!

      Sierra