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Washed Up



Come and break upon the waters edge
roll your coolness over my shore
reflect each day with shadows green-blue

your treasures thought washed up 
continue to be cherished here


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30 Words & Picture prompt from the contest

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  • maralisa silver member
    April 17, 2008
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    beautiful relaxing words penned good luck and thank you for entering my contest


  • BluRosePoet8488
    April 15, 2008

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    Amen.
    Knot, this poem has a very soothing quality to it. One can almost feel and hear the waters lapping on shore as you read. Well written, my friend. Keep the ink flowing and good luck. love and hugs...
    ~Donna~