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Cherries

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Delectable dalliance

sashayed in strumpet seduction,

her soft hints of allure

serve the sweet taste

of forbidden innocence.

 

Bloodying trust is her essence's snare,

ravenous for a succor

offered by susceptible lips,

who feigned virginity

cast in vulnerable facade

first infused

by her pimp purveyor of deception.

 

To any night

her body brings a steady burn

with candle

raging into the suppressed

ecstasy lairs

lying behind stares

from those squirming in appetite.

 

Each eve her cherries

are tossed with gasps and gestures

consumed in passion and faith,

every wanton soul that bites them

only left unsatisfied and in pure agony

when the morning after comes

and their dreams of defiling her fruit

fled to sight of leaded skies,

uttering a lament of pure dismay

"dam you weather gal"

for having again teased

with sugary vain promises.

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Forbidden Fruit by DuvallGear (found at deviantart.com) MUST CREDIT IF USED.
http://www.deviantart.com/print/2959061/

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  • This is such a very unique piece of certaive thought. Well penned, vivid and taunting composition. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!


  • Grimoire
    April 15, 2008

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    Smartly written and with such bite. Another intriguing poem ... the first stanza is very very poetic and reads eloquently, suggestively. Bravo!

    until exhale,
    Grimoire