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Hell's Road

She roams the abyss,
eyes wildly searching
paths that are paved
with all wretched pilgrim's weariness
glittering in her sight. 

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thanks, Robin

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  • Tattboyspet
    April 16, 2008
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    thank you for your entry


  • Robin Candor
    April 15, 2008

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    You and I are friends so I will tell you first that wretched has a 'w' in it. Secondly, I cannot see the picture and that makes it better for me. Being in an unfamiliar place with fear is a great connection here. Now the paths are paved so obviously many others have visited and tread the same journey. What made the path? All the previous soul treaders that are tired. How they 'glitter' in her sight escapes me and my mind's eye? I suppose the worn down spirits could glitter and after all, it is your piece. Make no apologies. RC


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    awww this is very nice and calm, yet dark. lovely job and good luck
    take care
    stephanie =)


  • XxTwigxX
    April 15, 2008

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    Very short and sweet and to the point, and a very awsome picture in my minds eye. Nice write my friends. Good luck on the contest.

    XxTwigxX