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Backdoor Heaven

In darkness
Trepidations masticate cartilage
From oxidized mechanical wings
As martyred flesh
And charred, outstretched bones
Beg the teasing light

Author notes

heaven wouldn't be worth it if it didn't lie at hell's backdoor.

enjoy.

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  • judy011
    April 16, 2008
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    really like this poem


  • Tattboyspet
    April 16, 2008
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    thank you for your entry


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    ooohhhh...i really love the descriptions of this, it's pretty ^_^
    lovely job and good luck
    take care
    stephane =)


  • blackfang4318 gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    wow

    that pome was something new and dark and you might want to put more on their to keep the it coming back hate and worry


  • Deathless1
    April 15, 2008

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    this is dark, and the words are beautiful like a painting of a mass murder. but i really love it.
    Keep it up.
    KNIGHT TIME

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