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Awaken

An emerald asp
at rest in sacred tableau
Disturbance…a wake

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    Beautiful haiku an dlovely picture This was excellent
    thank you for entering.


  • marlene47 silver member
    April 16, 2008
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    Hey, I'm awake!
    Very nice. I like the asp/snake for river at rest.
    Marlene


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 16, 2008

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    Now here is a Haiku ... sad and deep it says so much in just 3 lines

    Best of luck in the contest
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda