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Life.

Coffee in the mornings to start my day off right
Before nine o’clock I end up in a fight
Its always over the silliest things of what to do or who said what
Making breakfast and taking care of the baby
Tell me when I signed up for this ?

Papers all over the table from last week it seems
Money not an issue but where it goes is
All day long smiling, laughing and screaming is
All I seem to hear. But must accept it all.
From it is from my dear.

Walks and sun light so bright
TV time just to wait for him to get home
To start it up again he always thinks he has to win
Spilled nail polish and money on a stupid tan
Tell me when reality kicks in.

Pick-a-boo and who said what
Its that time again my dear
We hit a hard spot
Photos of the past a time of what use to be
So many fights why me?

Your mood is like a star so charming but bright
You give me the best hugs but you are the worse in a fight
You’re an amazing daddy she will be your girl
But maybe you should kick it up and be a good boyfriend too.
Some nights I just don’t know what it is I am to do!

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  • hopelessryan
    April 16, 2008

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    there you go with your coffee i swear, it is really hard for me to read these poems of yours they are so great and well said but knowing the back ground behind them all hurts much. but that is all on me wonderful baby.


  • Lonely Christina
    April 16, 2008
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    lol i like it! (and of course started out with coffee lol)


    • bangbaby
      April 16, 2008
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      thanks much for the comment!
      && yet i am drinking coffee as i write this lol

  • Sunshine Princess
    April 16, 2008
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    I like your poem you are good writer have a nice day


  • pancake
    April 15, 2008
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    Hun! hope your ok! thanks for the comment! this is really really good.


    • bangbaby
      April 15, 2008
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      you are welcome and back at you!
      i am great thanks!


  • James R
    April 15, 2008

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    Wow this is an amazing piece of writing so much heart was in each word I hope everything works out for the best


  • SageyBaby
    April 15, 2008

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    I REALLY enjoyed this, is this your typical daily life routine!How hard but its worth it when its someone you love, well written x


  • ucancallmereal
    April 15, 2008

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    yes very touching, it caught me by surprise i liked it alot but some parts seemed like were from different perspectives so it kinda confused me but thats just me lol but very good write still!

  • fantasylandthinker01
    April 15, 2008
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    WOW very touching

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