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Metaphors of Life

Life is just some train tracks
Getting ridden on every day
Just when you think the train is gone
You haven't lost your way

Life is just a spider's web
Sticky yet still strong
Enjoy it while you can because
It doesn't last for long

Author notes

This is only supposed to be two stanzas long. Not to toot my own horn, but I think thia is a beautiful poem. I made it in English Class.

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  • cutiepatutie1001
    May 31, 2008

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    this is a nice short poem.it is actually true you can have good times and bad times like it says in line 5 life is just a spiders web.i like his poem and i hope you come and look at my poem.thanx,
    yasmine


  • Naznomarn
    April 15, 2008
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    I shall toot your horn for you! Very loverly!

  • amy86
    April 15, 2008
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    I agree that is very beautifully written and so true too xxx