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to reach hell------------

Sinning to win
is straight way to heaven
and winning to commit  sins
undoubtedly , a sure way to reach hell

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credit: Desiccant by blogger

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    hahaha, this is great!

    wonderfully done and good luck
    a nice twist
    take care
    stephanie =)


  • In Too Deep1
    April 15, 2008

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    A wonderfully penned take on the prompt. I enjoyed the depth of wisdom penned in this writ. Beautiful flow. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the comp


  • Tattboyspet
    April 15, 2008
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    LOL! This was quite funny (or is that just my twisted sense of humour?)