Say hello 2 the room where the party's jumpin'
Where the girls are naughty and always saying
'Yes u can, yes u can, yes u can
Whats the matter?
Does your love need a home?
Alright then, Love me just leave me alone!
These foolish games are tearing me apart
And your thoughtless words are breaking my heart
You're breaking my heart
Sell your sin. Just cash in.
You got something that you want me to tell
You'll love me. Wait and see
It's gonna be all right, no matter what they say
It's gonna be a good day, just wait and see
It's gonna be okay, cause I'm okay with me
Tell your boss you're dead, And let's go back to bed
You make me want to break out in song
But everytime i try it just comes out wrong
I got my eggs and my pancakes too
I got my maple syrup, everything but you
You were meant for me, and I was meant for you
I stood on the edge, and saw that you held my hand
and knowing too well, I couldn't hide from those eyes
Please, don't let me fall in love with you again
These foolish games are tearing me apart
And your thoughtless words are breaking my heart
You're breaking my heart
'Cause anyone can start a conflict\, it's harder yet to disregard it
I'd rather see the world from another angle
We are everyday angels
And it's good sex, you look to the sky
You look to the man
You claim innocence
Or am I standing still
Out of the corner of my eye
Was that you passing me by
Author notes
this poem is takeing 3 lines from each song and combining them into a poem
my favorite artist is jewel the songs i used are (yes you can, love me, just leave me alone, foolish games, intution,good day, words get in the way, satelite, don't, Im sencitive,deep water, standing still)
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whoa girl this is really good! love it and love u lol
christina
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wow! this is really flippin good! i'd hella wanna hear this on the radio! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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thank you for the wonderful comment, if you dont listen to jewel maybe you should start
her new album comes out on june 3rd im so excited 
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Great write, thank you for you'r entry.
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Yeah, your lines flow a lot better than mine. You're obviously going to take home the gold in this one.
Justin
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