Death stenched Shadows scream,
filling pits, sipping from chalice,
clamored beneath forsaken pools,
defiantly spawning tomorrow's doom,
hell takes bride.
Author notes
Prompt: Pathway to hell
Image credit: Desiccant by blogger
A contest entry
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600 points, ended April 21, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i love that last line
good poem
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creepy in deep way, I like the vocabulary in this poem .
the last line really brings it home. excellent writing and good luck 2ya~
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mesa likeys very much *giggles*
this is excellent, it's sooo well WOW!
lovely job and good luck
take care
stephanie =)
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dark and creepy!!! loved it!
best to you in contest 
~Blessings always~ Trisha
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nicely woven verse with deep thoughts waving aroun
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~nodding head~
nicely done ... enjoyed this one and the last line was the BANG
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