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i told you i love you
but i guess you didnt hear
im searching for you
but you're no where near

i've tried to catch your attention
make you notice me
i want you so badly
but you refuse to see

i cant make you love me
i know that
i didnt have you to lose
so i cant get you back

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 HELP!!! I NEED A TITLE!!!

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  • ksenia juggalette
    May 18, 2008
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    its really good! and for teh title maybe "invisable" i think it fits