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Lives Collecting

Maybe I could sin
If it were to save your soul
Walking past the pillars
Where all the stories were told
Don't cheat the Gods above
Watching through the clouds
Speak in tongues unknown to man
Close your eyes, and let your ears absorb the sounds

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  • jacbgd2 gold member
    April 16, 2008

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    Very abstract indeed!!!!  I can see many messages in this one.... The number is endless depending upon one's imagination.... It is a little bit deep for me, however.
    But, I did like the times I read it and each time I got a different meaning... I am not a master of anything and would like to know what the true message is here or are there suppose to be more than one?


  • Deathless1
    April 15, 2008
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    would you sin to save my soul.

    i don't think it would work.