Uncurling serpentine style
Venomous fangs
Seeking their mark
Darkness engulfs it's victim
Victim seeming willing
To its fate
Engulfed to the dark
In time even
Memories will follow
Darkness filled
When all is consumed
From the light
RCLane
A contest entry
- Something Wicked This Way Comes.... by PerfectImperfection.
900 points, ended May 4, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice piece of daknes sportrayed in such a gleaming shine. Well done. Thank you for yur entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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Dark..But Deep!!!!!!!!
This was very deep for a dark piece of poetry...I liked it though nicely written with great, kind of scary imagery.LOve the background it goes perfectly with the poem!!!! If you like, Read my poem called "Reach For The Light" it kind of starts out like this but ends in a spiritual light!!! AGain this is very nicely written and I am not much into dark poetry but you express much in so few words here!!!~~Toni~~
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Thank you for stopping and commenting....Let me know what you think of this one please Roses of Sharon
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