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DR...No Encore

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There will be no encore

as the curtain falls

On the scene of forbidden love

while the audience recalls

 

Tears fill the eyes of the lovers

as they bid each other good-bye

Turning their backs on a future together

neither can explain the reason why

 

Both feel a heart that is broken

filled with memories of love and lust

Jealously separated their feelings

motivation for departing was trust

 

If only they could recapture their feelings

and turn back the clock to before

When they met and admired each other

until then, there will be no encore

 

 

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Prompt - Turn Your Pain Into Gold

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  • Kari gold member
    April 22, 2008
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    This had really good flow. Thanks


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    Wonderful rhythem and rhyme! brilliant and sorrow of the loss of a relationship is apparent and deep. Well done!

    Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    What a mood you set,
    what a perfect theme,
    "No Encore."
    A difficult tale
    to tell, which you do
    so very elegantly.
    May the red of hurt
    turn to the gold
    of overcoming.

    Take care.

    Aesthete


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 15, 2008
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    Wow--A Very well written & Heartfelt composition--Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest


  • arafura gold member
    April 15, 2008

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    Very well written my friend. An age old story told with skill and conviction. Good luck in the contest!

  • Papagallo
    April 15, 2008

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    Forbidden love can be very dangerious. I never would want to venture into forbidden territory. Your verse was sensious, but also a bit scary. It is deep and dark and a forbidden land to dwell into. Good luck in the contest.

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