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Dirt

No body listens to me,
They don't know me,
don't understand what I'm going through,
They don't know the pain
They're causing me,
I try to speak but they wont let me,
They tape my mouth shut,
and then they wound me;
with their words they hurt me,
They push me until I cant fall no more,
kick me until I say no.
I'm getting tired of it,
trying to make me go,
They move me until I cant
move no more,
hurt me until I finally let go,
and after all these years,
I know I wont.
They wont stop until I'm dead,
until I'm nothing but a stack of ash,
Cause that is what I am to my family,
Dirt.

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  • Rovingone gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    Like I said, I'm sure there are plenty of people who want to share your hardships with you. I'll listen. This is a pain filled write. Reach out, someone will be there.


  • ShmoofPuffs
    April 25, 2008

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    omg!!

    Really sad
    talk to me if u want i will listen


  • Flight of Dragons
    April 17, 2008

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    OH Sad!

    This wasa well written but very sad indeed. Don't worry though. You've gott freinds who care for you very much!

  • Bob Fox
    April 15, 2008

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    People

    people at times can be very cold and callous and it seems this poem speak out about such people. but some do care and the pain of this write is very evident