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Lost Light

Caught between decisions of wrong and right
Lost among the temptations of everyday life
Cheated by people and their sinful ways
Not sure what to do or say

Promised the guidance, promised the hope
Ensured the kindness, ensured the joy
Trying not to be selfish or crude
Infinite feelings and emotions renewed

Brand new events and situations we must face
Each action followed with a consequence
Praying that everything will turn out alright
That in the end this choice will bring me to the light.

Author notes

not much of a religion person but its nice sometimes to believe in "something"

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  • sunflowers21573
    May 2, 2008
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    I really liked this poem, it so much speaks the truth, especially the part "Each action followed with consequence" You must have given great thought to this one. Thank you also for commenting on my poem "The Horizon". Your words of wisdom are much appreciated. Hope you have a great day


  • Rclane
    April 30, 2008

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    So much truth in this. We all strive each day with each step to stay the course laid so long ago....well done. it came from the heart.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 18, 2008
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    This is indeed a wonderful thought structure bringing the truth in life .. I love this wonderful piece..thanks for sharing it....


  • exithere
    April 15, 2008

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    pretty angii! lol and yeh justin comming after school to get ur homework. i gotz it all. if u dont come 2morrow i shall do the same....feel better hun! i love u