I was besides the space of land
well within vibrations of harmony
don't reach the glance, has no war,
in this paradise, God disappearing.
Next to her word then I was hearing,
don't even know how to explain emotion,
only the vision would be enough,
to remind, I kissed your hand.
With an universe in communion,
woke up with the passing zephyr,
feeling grateful much in soul,
since the wind was dazzling me.
Realized the voices of air,
to wake the pleasure of torments,
the life brings.
Author notes
Prompt: 7) Or the simplest of all the prompts(though you get brownie points for the one above). Write simply about lost love.
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I love the vocab here, especially the word "zephyr." It took me a little while to get this, but the mystery of this poem's meaning is nice too.
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I have to say that I had to read the poem two time to understand it but once I did it was like....woah. I really like it. I think it's beautiful
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