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These Fingertips


tracing the line
of your cheek,
lingering
at the corner
of your mouth


these fingertips
read every pore,
to hold the
feel of you in
their memory



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I love you...always.

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  • willowprincess
    May 27, 2008

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    great job. this was so sweet and you captured a lot of emotion in such a few words. you leave me longing for more. (in a good way of course)


  • Riftkin gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    You hold the tender moment
    of love in your few words
    that causes the heart to flutter.

    Riftkin


  • lianna27
    April 15, 2008
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    the feelings and emotion are so clear...its amazing how much a few wordds can mean..beautiful


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 15, 2008

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    The passion and feelings of love and sensuality in this is just breathtaking. It is very very beautiful and imagery. Such subtle power within these few words. Amazing.

    Love it Margaret.

    Love
    Wayne Leon
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