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Decoration





Decorated with
  strawberry butterflies
  she clasps
    breath
  in single touch.





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Sorry! I suck at optimitic writes!

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  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    wow ~ you've won me over... x


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    April 15, 2008

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    Very beautiful take on the prompt.
    Wish you the very best in the contest
    Take care,
    Many blessings
    David


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    Very beautiful imagery and depth...a nicely written piece...Best to you!


  • Age of Rain
    April 15, 2008
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    This was beautifully done. A vivid image that grasps the reader immediately. Nice.