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Beau




Laid between flowers
do you see colors
of mischievious vagalume?




















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Prompt: Beautiful soul

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 15, 2008
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    Truly thought provoking and creative... x


  • Age of Rain
    April 15, 2008

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    Nice choice of words. One suggestion: end with a question mark. You did ask one after all. Overall, nicely done!