Laid between flowers
do you see colors
of mischievious vagalume?
Author notes
Prompt: Beautiful soul
A contest entry
- Beautiful Soul by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 15, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Truly thought provoking and creative... x
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Nice choice of words. One suggestion: end with a question mark. You did ask one after all. Overall, nicely done!




