Childish laughter
shines through adulteyes,
sparking
a rooms hope.
Author notes
beautiful soul
I work with adults with disabilities and was amazed at the beauty they bring to so many.
A contest entry
- Beautiful Soul by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 15, 2008, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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As i read the winners entries, this one captured my attention. congratulations on the bronze.
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so creative and such a moving piece... x
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ahhhh...sis...
this is magic!!! as only YOU can pen!
very well done...your heart is always so filled with light and love...
you are my hero!
this reads like GOLD to me...
this is true poetry...
love you!
Tammy
xoxox
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The magic exposed is all to real when the grace of childhood survives in adults. Allowing their wonder to bless those that see. Beautiful write sweetheart, best to you.
Love,
Mouser
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SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!!
I have been happily blessed to have know several people who have had disabilities but gave so much to everyone they came in contact with. I have a wonderful story of one man back home who gave to everyone no matter how little he himself had,and when he died in a fire in his apartment building his funeral was one of the largest my home town could remember. He at one time or another had helped in some way nearly everyone in town. He may not have been smart in many ways but in the ways it really mattered he stood out from all the rest. I was very young back then but did know him and to this day I think of him from time to time. A very simple person but one with a heart of gold.
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how perfect for you!!! i love this... and i wish i had thought of using that title for something!
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Two big thumbs up
Great words with a wonderful theme. Yes, I have seen the same thing in their eyes. I wish you much success with this one. Kudos, poetess
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Excellent
Beautiful take on this prompt. I used to work with adults with disabilities as well and they are very special
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Excellent
I work with autistic children and young adults. I can totally relate to this. Well done my fellow poet. ~Peace~Gar
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Gorgeous! So true... I have known adults with disabilities but have the joy of a child in them. Great write for that prompt!
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So gorgeous. This was an AMAZING take on the prompt. you took it into a place beyond beauty. Well done as all always!
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So gorgeous. This was an AMAZING take on the prompt. you took it into a place beyond beauty. Well done as all always!
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