Freeverse queen,
left without warning
So many questions
left unanswered...
Author notes
a beautiful soul, left AP suddenly.
Dalaney will be missed by many
10 words only
A contest entry
- Beautiful Soul by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended April 15, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
new writer, would love critique and feedback
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A strong write. I am sure that many people can relate to this one well. It is so hard to see people leave AP because you do form a great friendship. Great write, thank you for commenting on one of my poems as well.
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Short and to the point, flows nicely
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Bravo
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Your words speak volumes, yes, Dalaney will be sorely missed by any and all that knew her.
All the best...Sue
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Always sad when someone leaves.Good luck in the contest, Ros
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Yes I have read her work, very good stuff, she will be missed
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a good poem, maybe she just needs a break from the madness of it all, we all need a vacation at times from life
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Sadly expressive and sincere... x
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Yes, a lot of questions. Maybe the answers will come, maybe not......but I miss her. She is indeed a beautiful soul.
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Really?
I wasn't aware of this. When did this happen? Was there any explaination?
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She left a few days ago, no one has heard anything. her poems erased. perhaps she was being censored and got tired of it. I am just guessing. she will be missed terribly
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Hmm. Ponderous write. It makes one think, and that is always a good thing. Nice take!
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