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If You Could See

I see the way you look at me
When I'm walking next to her
I see the way you shake your head
And I don't even care
I hear the words you speak
But if you could only see

The way she looks at me
It's all I see
The way she smiles
If you could see what I see

I know the way you think
It tells you this is wrong
I know the way you feel
But I don't even care
If you don't like it turn away
But I wish that you could see

The way she makes me feel
It's all I need
The way she makes me smile
If you only knew

Please tell me what you think

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  • Lady Altheia
    January 15

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    Hoodwinked

    Love is love. Love doesn't descriminate. If other people don't like it, too bad. I have two friends who are a mixed couple. You have been hoodwinked by a Poetic Bandit.


  • Nicotine Eyes
    April 15, 2008
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    This was deep with your love. I hate homophobes. Can't stand em. Nice write.


    • DeAnges
      April 15, 2008
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      I hate homophobia too, but this is actually about racists and the "stick to your own colour" idealists.